Dialogue scene, six panels
The phone call
- Panel 1: Wide
- A kitchen at night. MAYA sits alone at the table, a phone face down beside a cold cup of tea. Sound: the fridge hum.
- Panel 2: Insert
- The phone buzzes and lights up: DAD. Sound: buzzing against the wood.
- Panel 3: Close up
- Maya stares at it and does not move. Camera: static, holding longer than is comfortable.
- Panel 4: Over the shoulder
- She turns the phone over and answers. We see the screen and her thumb shaking.
- Panel 5: Extreme close up
- Her eyes as she listens. Sound: the voice on the line, muffled, we cannot make out the words.
- Panel 6: Wide
- Same frame as panel 1, but she is standing now, the chair pushed back. Cut on the sound of the chair.